Diamante Poem


میں شاعر تو نہیں

                                                                                         

                                                                                    Sherjeel

                                                                             Dependable,Close

                                                                         Trustin',Caring,Creative

                                                                             Dream Big,Believe Hold!

                                                                           Unpunctual,Angry,Moody

                                                                                    Lazy,Cruel

                                                                                       Chawla


                                   

Comments

  1. Kashif HaiderNovember 13, 2020 at 5:18 AM

    You are very humourous person and the words you used are full of humour. . You are always trying to make amusement whether all the boys are serious. Same thing you have done in this poem. I appreciate you for this work.

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  2. Ali ZainNovember 13, 2020 at 7:37 AM

    Nice work.Absolutely right choice of words which describe your personality.

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  3. Syed Tallay HaidarNovember 13, 2020 at 8:02 AM

    The choice of words very accurately compliments ur personality.Very exquisite piece of artistic work.

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  4. Hassan MahmoodNovember 13, 2020 at 10:22 PM

    The wise choice of words depicts how ambitious you are in life .This piece beautifully describes that you want to achieve your goals in your life and the anomalous use of contradictory words is phenomenal

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  5. Muhammad DanishNovember 14, 2020 at 2:13 AM

    sir i am big fan i am want autograph

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  6. Syed Muhammad Hassan KazmiNovember 14, 2020 at 11:54 AM

    Well written and perfectly descriptive of your personality. I second a prior comment, in that your humorous nature is reflected in this written piece. Keep it up!

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  7. Bilal SiddiqueNovember 14, 2020 at 12:13 PM

    Enjoyed reading it.... Keep it up

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  8. Hamza Husnain AhmedNovember 15, 2020 at 4:02 AM

    Written at its best, it depicts your character very well. It summarizes your moods in a few words. i.e. being lazy and cruel at the same time XD. Good choice of words. Keep it up!

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  9. Osama Jarrar HaiderNovember 17, 2020 at 10:13 PM

    Well written buddy. I would like to know some particular traits of "Chawlas" which you've mentioned you're missing.

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  10. Hamza HussainNovember 17, 2020 at 11:40 PM

    You have written this poem beautifully. It shows how capable you are. Your words speaks for you.

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  11. Muhammad HaroonNovember 18, 2020 at 2:02 AM

    A very well written piece. You showed your qualities in a very descriptive way. The opposite side is described very clearly as well.

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  12. Muhammad AbdullahNovember 18, 2020 at 5:09 AM

    Your creativity does shines through your work, keep it up.

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  13. Saad Bin asadNovember 18, 2020 at 7:47 AM

    Really impressed by the work you have down. Very bold and vivid choice of words that suit well and describe your personality.

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  14. Mantique NawazNovember 18, 2020 at 7:56 AM

    A very unique and impressive passage. Very inspiring with excellent choice of words.
    From first word to especially the last, found it full of liveliness and positivity.

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